Good Attempt Ivy . . .
Ill be honest and say I didnt like it but not becuase it was girly or anything it just lacked alot of story telling. Sure the song moves it along but perhaps some spoken words and smoother animation would help. Oh yeah and some kind of struggle. Yeah the struggle was she couldnt finish putting make up on time but usually struggles are visually shown with more intensity and exageratted expressions. Hope you keep at it.